Thursday, June 4, 2020
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Joshua. My name is Teylah and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like how you have passion about tornadoes because I am passionate about tornadoes too.I LOVE how you put sooo much detail into your presentation, but maybe if I were you I would try to add more slides into my presentation.
ReplyDeletewell i really appreciate your feedback i will put more slides into that story =)
DeleteKia ora Joshua. My name is Georgia and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like your tornado slide presentation you made. Maybe next time you should try add more slide’s into your presentation to make it a bit more interesting.
ReplyDeleteworking on it thanks for the feedback =)
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